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    Default Love Stinks Until It Begins

    the day he felt his heart go weak,

    was the day you stopped to speak.

    all you asked,

    a simple question.

    but still his heart has not yet learned its lesson.

    every time that you walk by,

    it beats faster and faster,

    to the point that he think he might die.

    if you don't say a word to him,

    then he might choke on his own tongue,

    from lack of love.

    he needs this now,

    especially today,

    after nothing has gone his way.

    in the hall,

    he sees you there,

    and doesn't even bother not to stare.

    all he needs is just a glace,

    why don't you at least give him a chance?

    you walk away,

    and his heart sinks.

    i guess he learned the hard way,

    that love stinks.

    another day has gone by,

    he still can't put you in the past.

    so he looks,

    just once more,

    to see you staring at the floor.

    then,

    as you're standing there,

    he sees a drop fall to the floor.

    the boy rushes to your rescue,

    to make sure that your tear doesn't hit the ground.

    a bit too late,

    for when it does,

    his heart starts to pound,

    he's done it again.

    made a fool of himself,

    didn't even know where it began.

    but instead of laughing in your face,

    you just stand and twirl your lace.

    then you look up,

    into his eyes,

    and ask him why he's been so nice.

    and then he tells you,

    loud and clear,

    of how truly bad he needs you near.

    you don't feel sorry,

    not a bit,

    but still you reach out and say,

    i always wanted it that way.

    i know you love me till the end,

    but i just wanted to let you know,

    this is where we begin.

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    Default Re: Love Stinks Until It Begins

    not bad.

    It is impossible for any severed individual to experience pain
    Pleasure, memory, dream or thought of any kind
    This young man will be as unfeeling as unthinking as the dead
    Until the day joins them

    I don't know weather I'm alive or dreaming or dead or remembering
    How can you tell what's a dream and what's real
    When you can't even tell when your awake and when your asleep
    Where am I?


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    Default Re: Love Stinks Until It Begins

    not bad man not bad and well done

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    Default Re: Love Stinks Until It Begins

    Not BAD?

    I don't know about you, I personaly think

    OOOh my god

    Your Good.

    Tell me more.


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    So lovely

 

 

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