Thread: How It Makes Me Feel

HOW IT MAKES ME FEEL



Is it true

Is it real

What the world has come to

How sad this makes me feel



People fighting for

What they think is right

People blowing them selves up

And not giving up with out a fight



People getting killed

For being who they are

People getting tortured

For what the believe in



A young man dies

Because of drugs

Or shoots himself with a pistol

Because he thinks life sucks



Girls dropping out of school

To raise their own kids

Where is the father?

Seeing someone else



Kids with no possible future

Fathers with no jobs

Mothers trying to keep the family together

But gets lost in the fog



The fog that blurs their visions

The fog blinding their hopes and dreams

All for stupid reasons

Reasons that cause war

They can never have a normal life

A life with out the fog



Where is the justice

And what the hell ever happened

To being fair



Is it true

Is it real

What this world has come to

how shameful this makes me feel



This is unacceptable

This should stop

Let us stand through this together

till we drop



To make the world

A better place to live in

To make the world

A better place to be



So that peace spread overseas

So that hope and joy is what the future can see....

Interesting, did you make this?

mmmm yeah its ok, i like the meaning to it, nice.

thanks...yeah i wrote it....well there was a skool competition....and i wanted to go to that theme glad you guys like it

[quote name='wacko1574']thanks...yeah i wrote it....well there was a skool competition....and i wanted to go to that theme glad you guys like it[/QUOTE]



this is really good

thanx appreciate it ALEX.....well poetry is one thing i am good at.....so i will be posting all that i can of my poems and hope you guys like it

[quote name='wacko1574']thanx appreciate it ALEX.....well poetry is one thing i am good at.....so i will be posting all that i can of my poems and hope you guys like it [/QUOTE]



hopeing to read more soon

that was outstanding and true on that...the way the world has come too thanks for sharing that ...very good

[quote name='Angelkisses']that was outstanding and true on that...the way the world has come too thanks for sharing that ...very good [/QUOTE]

THANK YOU VERY MUCH ....i rlly have no idea y most of my poems are like that...others think they are over depressing ....but it is the fact

nice writing ::