Thread: Smile Instead

okay this i think is my lamest poem EVER!!...i know most loved those other two...but this i am not sure abt.. well i was watching this movie...and the dude dies :( ....so i wrote it







Dreaming of you I saw my future

Looking at you I knew it was a bright one



You made me strong when I was all alone

You made me brave, glowing my little dark cave "ie my heart"



Filled with emotions

feelings and depressing situations

Filled with happiness

hope and breath taking conversations



You made me smile when i was sad

You made me laugh whenever I got mad



You told me to

Always look at the bright side

You asked me to

Always face my problems and never hide



I'll always love you

Even if you are dead

I'll always remember you and smile instead...

errmmmmmm

wow yeah i like it very much i feel the ending its great :BeerSong:

aww thanx....appreciate it

okay this i think is my lamest poem EVER!!

na mate thats good.

lol thanx serial killer.....well thought it was a bit cheesy....but thnx dude appreciate it

I'll always love you

Even if you are dead

I'll always remember you and smile instead...

soooooo sweet.

awwwww......lol everytime i read that stanza i get tears in my eyes....damn i am sensitive....lol thats kinda the point of writing it