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doom place
it was cold , it was like an overlload . the scary stillnes was all around , in a deep pool about to t0 completly drown, i screamed no one heard a sound . i choked i fought . it was a nightmare , life just isnt fair . evilness was lurking slowley to steel my being . i t was a dead feeling crewl and i felt un worthy , the presence was getting closer now , howling and venting out sounds of lust . invadeing my space. he made me feel the hunger for bitterness and its awful taste. here it comes agian all around . , the urgency to yell out , saten is touching my heart binding to him , keeping me under so ill never get out , god just let me shout . let me live :drool:
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A++ loved it.
you should make a poem website lol. sounds like some small anger build up you have, just a tiny bit, because i can feel every word. poems are a good way of letting things out, keep it up. and sorry if im wrong with the feelings build up thing. cheers ;)
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wow a website what a thought i never thought of that ty u so much im very touched that you love my poems i love to worite poems and thoughts ty
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yeah 5 stars from me to ;)
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