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    Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 11:49 am Post subject: like tears Reply with quote

    I miss you in pangs

    Sensations inside

    Each hurting more

    Deeper pain everytime

    Residude of memories

    The ways that I knew

    Smokey deciepts

    The ways that it grew



    I miss you in shots

    Bursting outside

    Like frozen bullets

    Of yet another lie

    I wish you'd return

    And awaken me

    But you lie underground

    In a box below my feet



    I miss you in waves

    Crashing beneath

    Learning each lesson

    With nothing to teach

    Bravery of loss

    And wandering lies

    You stay deep within me

    But flow out when I cry

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    thats really nice.

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    nice poem.

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    Wow I love it

 

 

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