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    i think i need to add more but this is what i have so far.





    HEARTBREAKER



    I've taken one too many blows

    To the heart, it seems

    I guess my hearts been ripped apart

    At the very seams



    Broken, then forgot about

    Left to mend alone

    You took away a part of me

    And left me on my own



    And though i know some time has passed

    My heart lay broken still

    So now I hide myself inside

    Behind a stubborn will



    I show myself to no one

    And think all men the same

    And now I do regret the day

    I ever learned your name

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    great poem, nice job.

    .Roger Federer.

 

 

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