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    This is just a small piece of writting about some of the things I believe in. It's kind of symbolic and you may not understand it but either way I would really like to hear some feed back whether it good or bad.



    To The Generation of Tomorrow:



    As the cold knife is withdrawn from my flesh I feel the warm blood spill down my chest. I lay there in the stillness of the universe and feel the darkness begin to seep in...



    All is gone and has come to an end, everything is lost in this darkness that has consumed me. I can no longer feel, nor see, nor breathe. Dare I ask but what has become of me?



    This darkness is never ending it continues for an eternity. It will not stop. Not until is has possessed every you and all of me.



    You will know when the darkness is upon you, you will become numb to the world, the darkness will close in around you and envelope you in its arms and as it swallows you whole you will feel nothing.



    At first the darkness will not seem so bad and almost a relief, but soon you will realize that this is not what you want, and this can not be your fate.



    We must make a stand, the darkness has control of our leaders and our nations. Will we do nothing as it consumes us also?

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    orsum, loved it. :ok:

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    did you come up with all the words and the idea all on your own?



    Glistening fangs and gleaming claws,
    Teeth that pierce and jaws like saws,
    Its blood red eyes that pierce the moon,
    My fate is awaiting it will be here soon.

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    Default Re: To The Generation of Tomorrow

    Quote Originally Posted by SkItZ
    did you come up with all the words and the idea all on your own?


    Yes I did although people seem to think I'm making a reference to the placebo song "Every You and Every Me" but I did not mean for that.

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    well great job then and i love it and i love the song "Every You and Every Me" well i love placebo to

    keep up the good work.



    Glistening fangs and gleaming claws,
    Teeth that pierce and jaws like saws,
    Its blood red eyes that pierce the moon,
    My fate is awaiting it will be here soon.

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    wow this is something i do not wish upon myself lol, but hey i really like it well done.

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    now thats my type of poem



    As the cold knife is withdrawn from my flesh I feel the warm blood spill down my chest


    nice add on :superman:
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    It is impossible for any severed individual to experience pain
    Pleasure, memory, dream or thought of any kind
    This young man will be as unfeeling as unthinking as the dead
    Until the day joins them

    I don't know weather I'm alive or dreaming or dead or remembering
    How can you tell what's a dream and what's real
    When you can't even tell when your awake and when your asleep
    Where am I?


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    Thankyou everyone for feed back



    I was just curious but did anyone actually get what I was talking about?

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    Death and beyond death? is there something happening in this world that relates to this?
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    It is impossible for any severed individual to experience pain
    Pleasure, memory, dream or thought of any kind
    This young man will be as unfeeling as unthinking as the dead
    Until the day joins them

    I don't know weather I'm alive or dreaming or dead or remembering
    How can you tell what's a dream and what's real
    When you can't even tell when your awake and when your asleep
    Where am I?


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    Ok let me try to explain what I'm on about



    Well "the darkness" (not the band) basically represents hate in the world.



    Our world is consumed by hate and so are the people who lead our nations, I believe that the young people of today "the generation of tomorrow" can make a difference I believe we can change the world and put an end to all this hate and all it would take is for each of us just to show some love and compassion to one another, they say "a smile is catchy" well guess what so is love.



    Slowly this darkness is taking over us and if we let it continue we will only become colder.

 

 

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