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    Paranoid let the slience in

    out in the distance , ihear a vaint cry ,i take a deep breath and give a big sigh, i m closing my ears so i cant hear . locking my door and filled with fear. finding a corner where i can hide , if i close my eyes and open them agian .this is real its no pretend . dont move a muscle just stay put , close the windows close them shut. my body is shakeing and im all alone , this heart of mine is cold as stone , the crys are louder and i hear the moans. please let it go let the silence in .

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    just amazing mate.

    "locking my door and filled with fear" my fav part.

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    ty im glad u liked it ty

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    *clapclapclap*
    Keep it up!

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    hey moonlite thanks ok

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    Nice! i really like it.
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    soooo good.

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    It is a interesting sharing.

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    well, that's interesting. keep writing such things, your imagination and vocabulary still need to be polished.
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