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    This is a poem is I wrote when i was about 14 (like ten yers ago!!) it was for a school competition.



    THE TRUTH HURTS,

    By Tarryn.



    He said he'd never hurt me

    he said he'd never lie

    he said no-one could ever see

    he said for me he'd die.



    Then one day he told me

    I'd been very bad

    he said he had to punish me

    because i maDe him maD

    he said it was our secret

    and that i cannot tell

    he said that if i told them

    he'd send me straight to hell.



    One day I said i'd had enough

    I can't take anymore

    so he threatened me that he'd get rough

    just like he did before.



    I said he could not stop me

    I'm leaving i don't care

    I said why can't you just see

    its better when your not there.

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    nicely wrote poem tarryn

    .Roger Federer.

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    nice

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    i like it tarryn

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    great poem tarryn.

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    loved it nice work.

 

 

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