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does this peom?
im not all that good at poems, but i have just read this one, does it make sense?confused...
Every time you look into
These hazel eyes of mine
Thoughts run through my head
And chills run up my spine
Going through my day
I long to feel your touch
Forever... or at least right now
I love you oh, so much
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It is impossible for any severed individual to experience pain
Pleasure, memory, dream or thought of any kind
This young man will be as unfeeling as unthinking as the dead
Until the day joins them
I don't know weather I'm alive or dreaming or dead or remembering
How can you tell what's a dream and what's real
When you can't even tell when your awake and when your asleep
Where am I?
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Newbie
the poem is a poem thats what counts
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yes is ok and i can understand
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