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    im not all that good at poems, but i have just read this one, does it make sense?confused...



    Every time you look into

    These hazel eyes of mine

    Thoughts run through my head

    And chills run up my spine



    Going through my day

    I long to feel your touch

    Forever... or at least right now

    I love you oh, so much

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    that poem sucks clap!!

    It is impossible for any severed individual to experience pain
    Pleasure, memory, dream or thought of any kind
    This young man will be as unfeeling as unthinking as the dead
    Until the day joins them

    I don't know weather I'm alive or dreaming or dead or remembering
    How can you tell what's a dream and what's real
    When you can't even tell when your awake and when your asleep
    Where am I?


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    the poem is a poem thats what counts

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    yes is ok and i can understand

 

 

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