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My notebook - mostly poetry
Decided that what some other members were doing - having one thread for all their poetry - would be a good idea. Most of my poems are written as lyrics. They often have the verse/chorus/bridge format, and there's always rhyme and rhythm to them. Sometimes I write stories/descriptive passages or essay type things, and if they're good enough I might post them here as well.
Oh, and comments are much appreciated.
I'll start off with one of my simplest, but also one of my best.
It's called "The Escape".
I leave the light on
And I leave myself
The figure in front
Must be some one else
Anyone else
I am paralysed
The world also seems to be
From all I've analysed
From all I've seen
The good things in life
Are but a dream
I feel the sting
Familiar sensation
It's calm, comforting
A sign of desperation
Pain ridden desperation
A slight sense of guilt
Accomanies it
Destroying all I've built
Stupid bull shit
Stupid shit
Worthless bull shit
Same old shit
And it's just about to
Start and finish
Again.
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